100 word challenge /A horror story by Angus/ (…that’s when i knew i should run…)

If you Go out In the woods Tonight

By Angus

It was cold as my tap water. I found my self hanging from a tree pinned by as i pulled my jumper of and jumped down i got a old chopping tool. I found the tool on the old mushy grass.

I picked it up to get my jumper as i put it of suddenly … that’s when i knew i should run…

I ran as a saw really creepy dark figure that ran at me as i got out my phone i used the light to guide myself out of the woods. My voice echoed through the woods “Hello” I said in a velvety voice.

2 thoughts on “100 word challenge /A horror story by Angus/ (…that’s when i knew i should run…)

Good work!

I’d change the following things to make it more coherent:

As i pulled my jumper off and jumped down i FELL ON a old chopping tool.
as i put it of suddenly … I heard something…
“Hello” HE said in a velvety voice.

then it’ll be scarier if it is the thing that says something in a velvety voice.

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